Well this is my review on this song: It was something very simple, the mini-drops haven't convinced me completely, you could use a very light sub bass, a crash cymbal every 4 or 8 measures and a few impacts and risers; and for the drop, it was a little better, I liked that growl a bit, but the sequence of the drums was repetitive and I would recommend lowering the volume of the hats.
On the other hand, I've liked those melodies that you created for that lead and the piano. At least I see that you've put in the effort to make this great song, but I know that you will improve a lot your skills someday, cheer up Vortonox! :)